I saw the one.
She makes my heart stop and leap in to my throat
she the one that makes my haert move.
She is the most sweet and astonishingly beautiful girl that has ever crossed my path.
I have fallen head over heels... she make me speachless.
She makes my heart feel forever empty when she is not around.
She lives only a few hours away it hurts because it's all too far for me to bare.


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